-This is a preview for a fanfic (for the Alchemyst book series) I am writing. Please comment for critiquing, no crude comments. All advice is listened to -
The Black Annis
Black Annis, also known as Black Agnes, is a bogeyman figure in English folklore. She is imagined as a blue-faced crone or witch with iron claws and a taste for human flesh.
But what happens when these nightmares are really true?
John Robertson was any regular American, he had a job, a home, a family. And he was a trucker. On his way back to the company station, he went down a thin, old road that he usually used for a shortcut. There were barely any lights to light the road, so he turned his truck lights on; it was getting dark quickly. As he passed Dolly's Cafe, a rundown cafe from the 50's that he usually at dinner at, the air became cold. He glanced at the air conditioning. It was on cool. He shivered, and turned it up to heat. Suddenly, his radio became fainter, fainter, and fainter, before John could only hear the static. Oh well, he thought, Bad signal out here anyway. Suddenly, John saw a figure, in a scarlet red cloak, walking up the side. So he pulled over and opened a window.
"Hey, you need a ride?" He shouted out. It was a teenager girl. She had raven black hair, braided in the sides, pitch black eyes, porcelain skin, and a slim build. Her lips were blood red. She looked at him , her eyes staring him down. "Well?"
"I guess so. Thank you, John." Her voice was steely and experienced, like the teenager was older than he thought. He wondered how she knew her name. Oh well, maybe his tag was still on the side of the door. John started the truck up again, pulling back onto the road and nodding.
"The weather seems cold tonight, don't it?"
"The weather does not bother me."
"Oh, are you one of those trekker kids? I heard about you on the news. I'm proud of you."
"Thank you...." The girl trailed off.
"What is your name, again?"
"Annie."
"Nice name, I was about to name my daughter that. She's my special girl." He smiled, nodding. The girl chuckled.
"I don't remember my parents. I guess you can say... I'm a foster child."
"Poor you! You must be going to college soon, anyway. Think of any colleges yet? I graduated from Ole Miss."
"No.... Anyway, John. Have you heard of the Black Annis?"
"In history when I was in high school!" John laughed. "She was the witch that ate humans, right?"
"I suppose so. I don't being called blue-skinned, though." You could hear the smile in her voice.
"You just said "I don't like being blue-skinned."" John glanced at her, frowning. Was this teen implying that she was The Black Annis?
"I know I did. And you know what, John Robertson?" She said, a menacing tone in her voice. The air was growing cold. John looked the the windows, which were frosting. His fingers were blue. Annie came closer.
"What? Stay away from me girl!" There was a tone of panic in his voice. The girl put her hand on his arm.
"I just love the way humani's wild, untrained aura pops up when they are afraid. You are a cinnamon smell, the aura burgundy. Your aura shall be a feast to never forget!" She giggled, like a schoolgirl. "Well, at least I won't forget for tonight."
"Get away... Please! I- I- I just wanna see my family!" He said. She smiled again, and she launched herself onto him, her fangs planted themselves on his temple, which was perfect for aura-drinking. The truck swerved and hit a large oak tree, and Black Annis looked over for a second. The front was totaled, the windshield cracked beyond repair. Her eyes were now a deep burgundy, just like John's aura. She held out her claws, scratching deep pits into them so he would look like any other crash victim. She ate some flesh, smiling. Tasted delicious. She punched the windshield, and jumping up, and walking over the smoking engine like it was nothing. She jumped onto the ground. She kept on walking, and smiled again. She had the man's thoughts now, just like all of her other victims. No, scratch that, Annis thought, her meals. She searched the memories, like a great computer, for recent news. It was yesterday's news, and the surroundings was a small fast food joint, full of sleepy, annoying humani. The headline was:
KILLING SPREE ACROSS WESTERN U.S.
Across the western U.S., more than three hundred have been killed, and messily. The bodies were extremely mutilated, all having two identical bite marks on the temple. Who knows, maybe a deranged killer or some new bizarre species of animal? Story continued on page 4.
Across the western U.S., more than three hundred have been killed, and messily. The bodies were extremely mutilated, all having two identical bite marks on the temple. Who knows, maybe a deranged killer or some new bizarre species of animal? Story continued on page 4.
Black Annis smiled.
"Oh, my humani foods, my hunt has not even truly begun. And John Robertson is only my start." She murmured. She kneeled down, like in a runner's starting position, then set off, running, her cloak whipping around her small, lean frame. She was wearing a black tank top, with black pants, and black tie-up boots. A necklace hung at her neck; It was a gold coin, from Danu Talis itself, with a small hole punched at the the top to fit a black leather string, which tied at the top. It was the only reminder she had of her sisters, Kali and Nemesis. They were usually with her, but at the moment, they were on other continents, starting their Plan. They were Great Elders after all; They needed to re-shape the earth like the others.
"The Plan has begun." Annis whispered as she stopped at the top of a hill, a shimmering city waiting in the distance. "Nemesis, Kali, I do think we shall succeed." She took out a dagger from her belt. It was a bright silver, the blade covered with exotic writings from dead languages and the handle decorated with jewels. This blade was very old, much older than Annis herself.Once Annis found The Aura, she would use it to kill the petty humani. "For its own good." She nodded, and started running again, making her way down to the city. She did not know the city's name, it wouldn't matter in a matter of days. What mattered is that none of the annoying immortal humani were in the city. They would put up a fight.
Though The Black Annis truly did like to fight.
It reminded her of the old days.